this aint a poem but im trying something new:

As life goes on...
and you faced more of it...
though bad times may go on..
and though you managed to overcome it...
it is not that you could hide from all these things...
if everyone could, who wouldn't???
but if nobody chooses to face it...
nobody is going to see the real thing...
and nobody can understand the meaning of life...

sometimes life may mean hopeless..
it is as if you have never seen light...
and you are sunk in the deep ocean...
seeing the faiding light...
you see things differently...
it was when you realized you can't breathe in the sea...
and you can't swim...
you struggled...
and suddenly...
and hand reached out...
and you grabbed it...
you were pulled by the force and in the end you resurfaced...
almost meeting death a few seconds ago...
through the experience, you learnt your mistake..
and from that you tried your best to be a better person..
soon enough you succeeded in life..
and you soared in the sky...
and you saw the light...

it was when...
you looked down...
and you saw the same hands...
that once helped you when you almost faced death...
reaching out... but instead...
this time...
in need of help...

knowing that you had soared that high...
you wouldn't want to come back on earth again, don't you???
and so you went on...
leaving that hand...
sinking in the ocean...

sometimes... you may be in need...
desperate for help..
and indeed someone came to save you...
but after you succeeded...
you forgot all that made you where you are now...

so basically i know its really noob.. just trying out.. and srsly arr... if its not malay then forget it maaan... im not good at writing el.. serious haha.. okok paipai